Basically, I finished my story. 135 pages long *-* I am now going to go back to adding stuff, because I still want it to go to at least 200 pages or somewhere close ;3;
I realized, this story was supposed to be sort of romantic and sort of mystery/action sort of thing. Except the fact that it is sickeningly romantic in the first half, and the rest is completely action. I'm fine with the end; I just need to do something about the beginning
Total word count: 53,255
I might upload it somewhere, but, and this goes especially for you, Mimi, I am posting these for criticism, and please say more than "This was really good," Or something like that that. I actually want some pointers. If I ever upload them. So raise your left hand and say, "I swear I will be mean."
Bye 6:
4:18 PM
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